Reflection on Second Draft

For this stage of drafting, I like that I added a lot more primary source and analysis of my text. I am concerned about reaching my page count and expanding my ideas, but I feel good about the amount of ideas/points I have gathered and that I know I will be able to say a lot about them. For feedback, I want reviewers to let me know about the clarity of my argument, the effectiveness of my use of primary source, and what more I could say about the primary source. I have about 10 more pages to complete for my final draft but I feel good about the progress I have made so far and the sources I have been gathering.